Can you PLEASE! tell me what you think of our song?

Can you PLEASE! tell me what you think of our song?


It's our first song.. so if we don't sound as good ... give us a little time :) we're working on it!...


meanwhile... give me your opinion... if it's good or bad,.. it'll help us improve...





thank you :)





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Can you PLEASE! tell me what you think of our song?
Nope didn't like the original. Try making a second version.


First version, sounded like i had 3 tracks playing at once on my itunes.


Maybe stick with one theme at a time and us a break to introduce the next part. keyboard intro, castlevania rock and melody,and then yell the story and then use the I'm a vampire for a chorus. ( chorus the whole group singing- I'm a vampire etc....)
Reply:Sound quality is a lil rough but its okay. Its not the worst I've heard! In Cali though your definitely going to have to do better than that sorry to say... Theres too many bands trying to make it there as it is.
Reply:Don't give up your day job!
Reply:sorry but that ifs fuking awful, not worth the mouse clicks i used to listen to it
Reply:*sigh* it was gay actually pretty gay.
Reply:i think the song was ok





in a scale from 1-10 u guys r probably like 6 that's good for the 1st song
Reply:its good i like it
Reply:It's really good :)


(Pick me as best answer) lol..
Reply:sorry to say that it was not that good, it needs to be a little faster tempo, and not so much reverb and echo, i'm not into that sorta music but alot of people i know are and this was a,llitte grainy, and the words hard to make out. but kudos anyway for at least getting out there and being heard, it's a little scarry these days trying to break into the buisness, i wish you all the luck in the world and hope your dream comes true. dont give up! this is just a test run you'll get right and will soon be on your way.
Reply:Sorry, I'm not into the whole "Oh look at me, I'm a vampire" scene. 5 years from now, you'll wake up and it will 'dawn' on you just how ridiculous the whole thing was.