Can you PLEASE! tell me what you think of our song?

Can you PLEASE! tell me what you think of our song?


It's our first song.. so if we don't sound as good ... give us a little time :) we're working on it!...


meanwhile... give me your opinion... if it's good or bad,.. it'll help us improve...





thank you :)





http://myspace.com/symphoniesofthedawn





(oh, add us if you'd like)

Can you PLEASE! tell me what you think of our song?
I like the style, however that is a really rough cut. I agree with what the others are saying...


Less echo/reverb, especially for the female vocals.


The male singer sounds like he's straining too hard to make that growly type voice... less growling, more singing.


The song overall needs to be mixed better. It's like as soon as the male stops, the female cuts in. What's wrong with a little overlapping of the vocals or even singing a few lines together?


I also think the background music needs to be louder and a little more in depth.


Just some constructive criticism... I really do like where you're going with this though... it's definitely a good start. Better than what I could do. :)





Have you heard Flesh Field? Your band reminds me of them, though they're more of an electro-industrial group... not really goth/darkwave. Check them out, if you haven't already.


http://www.myspace.com/fleshfield
Reply:OK-artistic but the recording is horrible so I couldn't listen to it-very tinny. By the by-I am a 35 year artist and was a art major in college . I can't understand your words due to the recording so you need to fix the basics to get going. Also-put some history on your space or in your blog-I was interested in your beginnings. Based in California too!
Reply:Sounds like you are a talented group of people. Keep up the hard work and pursue your dreams..........................


Good luck!
Reply:The echo is too strong,try more keyboards and giutar,the music was'nt as loud as the singing but not bad
Reply:That was interesting to say the least. I'd can the introduction and have some more actual singing in the song but not a bad start at all.
Reply:ooo i love it i would add you but it says i need email or last name!! great stuff very unique
Reply:I listened to your song and well no offense but it sounds like to much Eco and there is no Melody just talking into a mike with the Eco turned way up I could not make out any lyrics. I worked in publishing for years in Nashville and have been a songwriter most of my life with all types of music including rap if people cant understand the lyrics they wont buy it. listen to your competition and then listen to your song and judge yourself by the competition. try turning down the Eco and put more melody in the voice.